Just listening to this now - this is a beautiful, solid tune with lots of breathing room in the arrangement and a great mix, giving respect to all the layers you recorded. Love the grit in your voice, your backup vocals - and the guit solo is full of emotion. Gonna go check out the rest of your stuff now - bravo! -Lisa/Soma Star
This tune is very pleasant for the ear and the more I listen to it the more I like it. However, there's something in the vocal production that ruined the entire concept; it sounds as though the low frequency was completely cut off, which gave it that telephone effect. The production should be punchier and neater. The guitar solo is weak. Your voice is cute.
Wow you are a real poet I just had a real good listen to the lyrics of this song. Man you really know how to paint a picture with words. Exceptional!!! I love the "It's hard when your bones wear you down like stones and your conscious is made of clay" very cool.
Tim
I like the grit in your vocals and your songwriting is very strong. Nice to see that you give as much thought to your lyrics as you do to the instrumentation. That you did this all yourself makes this doubly impressive. Best of luck.
Patrcik Joeseph is such a genuine songwriter
his voice is utterly beautiful and his songwriting is amazing
Congrats to the a lovely musician and lovely person
"conscience made of clay" ... conscious lyrics and smooth sound that pours into the listener as it poured out of you.
Decent at best ... just joking, a great song and composition.
Be blessed and be a blessing as dreams come true.
Word.
D!NO*
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Soma Star says
Just listening to this now - this is a beautiful, solid tune with lots of breathing room in the arrangement and a great mix, giving respect to all the layers you recorded. Love the grit in your voice, your backup vocals - and the guit solo is full of emotion. Gonna go check out the rest of your stuff now - bravo! -Lisa/Soma StarIrena says
Congrats on your award! :)Irena says
This tune is very pleasant for the ear and the more I listen to it the more I like it. However, there's something in the vocal production that ruined the entire concept; it sounds as though the low frequency was completely cut off, which gave it that telephone effect. The production should be punchier and neater. The guitar solo is weak. Your voice is cute.Tim Tucker, Robbie Follesa, Freddie White, Moodswing Productions & Dave Meredith says
Wow you are a real poet I just had a real good listen to the lyrics of this song. Man you really know how to paint a picture with words. Exceptional!!! I love the "It's hard when your bones wear you down like stones and your conscious is made of clay" very cool.Tim
Doug Brod says
I like the grit in your vocals and your songwriting is very strong. Nice to see that you give as much thought to your lyrics as you do to the instrumentation. That you did this all yourself makes this doubly impressive. Best of luck.Avalon Parade says
Patrcik Joeseph is such a genuine songwriterhis voice is utterly beautiful and his songwriting is amazing Congrats to the a lovely musician and lovely person
A.C. says
Definitely award winning quality man. Congrats again, it was a good fight and the right man won. Enjoy it buddy.Amber-Rose says
Great song!!! Congrats!!!~Amber-Rose
Burning Red Sun says
Real nice song Pat...congrats on the win.....Ken/DeTouRBabylon Doggs says
"conscience made of clay" ... conscious lyrics and smooth sound that pours into the listener as it poured out of you.Decent at best ... just joking, a great song and composition. Be blessed and be a blessing as dreams come true. Word. D!NO*