Hi Perrga, I listened to your song Echo. Instrumental music makes me think of words. Yours influenced me as well maybe a little too literally, nonetheless, here is what your guitar tells me:
Echo
Just as I’m standing
Beside you at the corner near dawn
This rift between us
Is my boomerang voice returning.
To battle the silence
With a voice that whispers
A hollow outline
Of the cry I just exhaled.
Echo are you really me?
Why do I sound so unfamiliar?
Was that not the sound I made,
Rebounding as though underwater?
Listen to the point
As it wraps around a new meaning
To invest so much
In our moment of disappointment.
Still we are to scour
The pleasure we do find together,
We are the courtyard
Conducting the sounds of the heart.
Echo are you really me?
Why do I sound so unfamiliar?
Was that not the sound I made,
Rebounding as though underwater?
Mark Holman - 1/5/2008
Thanks for letting me listen. - Mark
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Avalon Parade says
This is quite lovely:-)
~ The Altruistic Messiah ~ a.k.a. ~ Ben Vandagriff says
Beautiful music !!!!!I've found Mark to come in quite handy with lyrics in the past ~ he's got a nice voice too !
Holworks Music says
Hi Perrga, I listened to your song Echo. Instrumental music makes me think of words. Yours influenced me as well maybe a little too literally, nonetheless, here is what your guitar tells me:Echo Just as I’m standing Beside you at the corner near dawn This rift between us Is my boomerang voice returning. To battle the silence With a voice that whispers A hollow outline Of the cry I just exhaled. Echo are you really me? Why do I sound so unfamiliar? Was that not the sound I made, Rebounding as though underwater? Listen to the point As it wraps around a new meaning To invest so much In our moment of disappointment. Still we are to scour The pleasure we do find together, We are the courtyard Conducting the sounds of the heart. Echo are you really me? Why do I sound so unfamiliar? Was that not the sound I made, Rebounding as though underwater? Mark Holman - 1/5/2008 Thanks for letting me listen. - Mark