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Better Tomorrow

Date Added: October 17, 2007

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This track was inspired by a TuPac track, and the Songs of freedom CD's 3,4....It is one of my contribution towards inspiration, hope, and change, thru positive action(s). I would like to, at this time, like to thank my daughter (JT) for the additional vocals!! After all she\they (our children) are all our future, and should be our most precious of treasures!

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11 Comments

  • Daryan says

    your daughter's voice and your's blends very nicely in the chorus, and both are very pretty. i got a bit of tlc waterfalls vibe when listening, but this is definitely unique and original. the smooth and kick back quality really works well. digging the message in the lyrics!

  • KICKING AT THE TRUNK says

    cool groove man

  • Pedestrian X says

    Pretty original. I just kinda laid back and enjoyed. Its positive and hopeful. Beautiful. Keep it up!

  • Aaron Jose says

    Sounding good brother! I like what you're doing!
    I gave you 4 stars! Aaron Jose

  • 1 says

    5 Stars for you
    Blessings Flick

  • The Perennials says

    i do agree about some of the other comments btw, but nothing that cant be fixed pretty easily. so yeah. hitting you up twice with 5 stars.

  • The Perennials says

    this sounds great! especially your voice. you sound kinda like y-cleff? i also like the female voice in there. 5 stars. wishing you the best of luck. real talent up in here.

  • smeeha says

    starting is nice and good .sweet voice ,some thing is not coming right out seems voice is compressed a May be hook on the chorus will do good job .try to put some echo on voice. I can do hooks for u if u want.

  • Red Monroe says

    Noel is right, make that snare kik harder. Its cool so far tho!